I just want to say that this is an absolute, beautiful piece of art. The same eraser markings and lined paper thing is still present here but I already told you about that in the last critique. Anyways, I really feel like this one is a bit more original because the characters have awesome designs. Their ears are just so cute and I love their hair. I guess for advice, I could suggest to work on learning how to draw ears? Though, it looks pretty good without them, it might come in handy learning how to draw the ears. Keep up the good work.